Summer Night, 1913, by Albert Bloch
weary souls await
eternal rest in comfort
moonlight's luminosity
reflects hope
floodgates of heaven
an entrance
to everlasting feast
they are drifters
for now
for now
in limbo
Posted for The Mag: 133
very cool take...it does look like they are waiting perhaps to enter heaven...we can hope at least...
ReplyDeleteoh i like your take on this....lovely...x
ReplyDeleteWell written Jean!.. Love it!..
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
I like the limbo notion...very nice...
ReplyDeleteI like the concept of limbo ~ Nice to see you ~
ReplyDeleteHow refreshing was that! I love the idea of drifters in limbo.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful response to the picture!
ReplyDeletenicely done...thanks for sharing your words
ReplyDeleteI always thought being in limbo must be horrid but this picture and your words make it sound quite heavenly ...thank you for sharing x
ReplyDeleteThey do look like drifters - in some kind of limbo. Nice!!!
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's very calming to be just in limbo. A very sweet poem.
ReplyDeleteYour poem like the picture, has an ethereal feel. Your words take on a soft, floating sensation that seems real. Thank you for sharing this marvelous poem, Jeanette. I adore the suspension! =D
ReplyDeletethe patience is so prevalent it makes you tremble wonderful
ReplyDeleteBeautiful interpretation of the picture !!!
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