Self-portrait, Vivian Maier
My heart bares all
Every beat on a gentle pace
Nothing is left to read.
Do you see myself?
Can you feel me?
I bet you don't
Because you treat me as trash
Don't look at me with your eyes
Only with your heart
Then and only then
You will see
That I am
Venus.
I like the way you did the poem! The shape and the write!
ReplyDeleteI wish we could all look (and be looked at) with the heart.
ReplyDeleteWell done…and a cool shape leading to the end.
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I love the direction this went, and the ending was fabulous.
ReplyDeleteBoth strong and skillful...
ReplyDeleteI hear these as lyrics...
ReplyDeletewise, your words are full of wind.
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