Monday, October 13, 2014

Mirror

 Self-portrait, Vivian Maier



My heart bares all
Every beat on a gentle pace
Nothing is left to read.

Do you see myself?

Can you feel me?
I bet you don't
Because you treat me as trash

Don't look at me with your eyes
Only with your heart
Then and only then
You will see
That I am 
Venus.






8 comments:

  1. I like the way you did the poem! The shape and the write!

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  2. I wish we could all look (and be looked at) with the heart.
    Well done…and a cool shape leading to the end.

    =)

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  3. I love the direction this went, and the ending was fabulous.

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