Monday, November 28, 2011

Dump

 



Soft and velvety,
witness of intimacy,
turned junked and trashy.






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Posted for Magpie Tales
Photo Prompt No. 93
Courtesy of Miss Tess Kincaid
Posted by at 12:04 AM
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15 comments:

  1. MargaretNovember 28, 2011 at 1:49 AM

    Yes, hard to imagine intimacy on that couch now!

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 28, 2011 at 2:46 AM

    short, precise, and meaningful.

    Smiles.

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  3. JinksyNovember 28, 2011 at 3:01 AM

    Sic transit gloria...

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  4. The PoetNovember 28, 2011 at 4:38 AM

    Hello.
    Not such a pretty sight now...I guess at some point, the sofa meant something to someone.
    Nicely done!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Thanks also for coming to the party at my blog. I'm still working on the final poem & will post it soon. I've made a video of some of the shenanigans & posted it on Facebook & also on my blog.
    All the guests are talking about it on Facebook! If you're on FB, "friend" me so I can tag you in the video too & then you can read what everyone else is saying.

    Hope to see you soon...have a great week ahead!

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  5. Carrie Van HornNovember 28, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    One man's junk was once another's treasure....well spoken Jeannette!

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  6. CHummelKornellNovember 28, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    You said a lot in so few words. Well done.

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  7. Isabel DoyleNovember 28, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    hard and brilliant - rather like a diamond haiku!

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  8. MartinNovember 28, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    I like the way you have given life to the object.

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  9. HelenNovember 29, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    Great Magpie! (don't you just hate it when that happens?)

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  10. TrellissimoNovember 29, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    Succinct...

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  11. Brian MillerNovember 29, 2011 at 4:26 AM

    hopefully it is the couch not the intimacy that gets junky and trashy...smiles.

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  12. hyperCRYPTICalNovember 30, 2011 at 7:44 PM

    Succint and well done!

    Anna :o]

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  13. AnonymousDecember 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM

    Dear jeannette: Poignant Haiku! And how! Most excellent...chiccoreal

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  14. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 1:59 AM

    short and sad

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  15. Julie Catherine VignaDecember 16, 2011 at 7:44 PM

    Awesome Haiku, I love it!

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