"Come to the water!"
The voice echoed through the waves.
"I will give you life."
"Despair not, my son.
I have not deserted you."
With eyes closed, consoled.
"Come and be reborn."
An invitation to grace.
Serenity thrives.
@ Jeannette D. Asuncion 2012
Posted for: The April Heights - Day 2 - #114 - DESERTED
Image Credit: family album
I enjoyed your haiku set. One of the lines I like most is "with eyes closed, consoled." Thank you.
ReplyDeletethank you for taking time to read my post...
DeleteI loved being there..at the same spot.. thank you..Jeannette.. RS:)
ReplyDeleteTo be assured that we are not deserted is a gift indeed!
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great haiku... :)
ReplyDelete"An invitation to grace.
Serenity thrives."
beautiful lines...loved the 3rd one... :)
Serenity thrives ~ definitely in your haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and very meaningful haiku. :)
ReplyDelete"with eyes closed, consoled". great line that, thank you.
That's a lovely place...Beautiful set of haiku :)
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku and photo.
ReplyDeleteMeaningful and uplifting ~
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you writing in this challenge ~
Loved these! The message is conveyed conversationally without losing the beauty :)
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