in man's search for home
he finds a mare's nest
where false reality reigns
no peace
no bliss
only unsatisfied hunger
for the Great Presence
perseveres
@ Jeannette D. Asuncion 2012
Posted for : Magpie Tales
Poets United :The Poetry Pantry Is Now Open! - #95
could it have been a nightmare's nest?
ReplyDeletein the dragon's nest
verification makes it really hard to comment. you'd get more comments if you turned it off
Good job again my friend!..
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
i hope he keeps looking then and does not settle as the rest...
ReplyDeleteI like the direction you have gone with the prompt. Clever and true.
ReplyDeleteAh true! Good job indeed!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Nice write...so true!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words....truly spoken! :-)
ReplyDeleteI always try standing on my head to help get past the mares nest.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the potent image
Now a mare's nest would make an interesting picture, eh? ! LOL
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