My heart drawn to yours.
Promises of a sweet life.
Has kept me afloat.
You asked me to come.
Under the rain I sauntered.
Waited for the kiss.
It has been a year.
Every time the heavens poured.
Same spot I waited.
Eyes got drenched in tears.
Soft sobs echoed through the rain.
The ducks felt my fears.
*****
Sad but nicely done Jean...
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talented write.