Friday, December 09, 2011

Drenched



My heart drawn to yours.
Promises of a sweet life.
Has kept me afloat.

You asked me to come.
Under the rain I sauntered.
Waited for the kiss.

It has been a year.
Every time the heavens poured.
Same spot I waited.

Eyes got drenched in tears.
Soft sobs echoed through the rain.
The ducks felt my fears.

*****





8 comments:

  1. Sad but nicely done Jean...

    JJRod'z

    Ps... In an hour, toronto time 8am, im on my way to NYC with Jim...

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  2. hi jj, thank you for the comment. have a safe trip...take care..

    hello Promising Poets Parking Lot...thanks for dropping by and for your kind word. learning from all of you...

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  3. Such sweet sadness. Very nicely done.
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/08/hope/

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  4. The Noiseless Cuckooclock10 December 2011 at 1:22 AM

    romantic and fun, love it.

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  5. It was sweet, but sad and made me want to cry. Well done!

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