Sunday, September 02, 2012

In Limbo

 
             Summer Night, 1913, by Albert Bloch                                   

weary souls await 
eternal rest in comfort
moonlight's luminosity
reflects hope 
floodgates of heaven
an entrance 
to everlasting feast

they are drifters
for now

in limbo

Posted for The Mag: 133



14 comments:

  1. very cool take...it does look like they are waiting perhaps to enter heaven...we can hope at least...

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  2. oh i like your take on this....lovely...x

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  3. Well written Jean!.. Love it!..

    JJRod'z

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  4. I like the limbo notion...very nice...

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  5. I like the concept of limbo ~ Nice to see you ~

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  6. How refreshing was that! I love the idea of drifters in limbo.

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  7. Beautiful response to the picture!

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  8. nicely done...thanks for sharing your words

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  9. I always thought being in limbo must be horrid but this picture and your words make it sound quite heavenly ...thank you for sharing x

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  10. They do look like drifters - in some kind of limbo. Nice!!!

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  11. Sometimes it's very calming to be just in limbo. A very sweet poem.

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  12. Your poem like the picture, has an ethereal feel. Your words take on a soft, floating sensation that seems real. Thank you for sharing this marvelous poem, Jeanette. I adore the suspension! =D

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  13. the patience is so prevalent it makes you tremble wonderful

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  14. Beautiful interpretation of the picture !!!

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