Monday, April 02, 2012

Invitation to Grace


"Come to the water!"
The voice echoed through the waves.
"I will give you life."

"Despair not, my son.
I have not deserted you."
With eyes closed, consoled.

"Come and be reborn."
An invitation to grace.
Serenity thrives.


@ Jeannette D. Asuncion 2012

Posted for:  The April Heights - Day 2 - #114 - DESERTED 
Image Credit: family album

11 comments:

  1. I enjoyed your haiku set. One of the lines I like most is "with eyes closed, consoled." Thank you.

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    1. thank you for taking time to read my post...

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  2. I loved being there..at the same spot.. thank you..Jeannette.. RS:)

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  3. To be assured that we are not deserted is a gift indeed!

    Deserted Branches

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  4. great haiku... :)

    "An invitation to grace.
    Serenity thrives."
    beautiful lines...loved the 3rd one... :)

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  5. Serenity thrives ~ definitely in your haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. Beautiful and very meaningful haiku. :)
    "with eyes closed, consoled". great line that, thank you.

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  7. That's a lovely place...Beautiful set of haiku :)

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  8. Meaningful and uplifting ~

    Great to see you writing in this challenge ~

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  9. Loved these! The message is conveyed conversationally without losing the beauty :)

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