Sunday, April 01, 2012

Mare's Nest


in man's search for home
he finds a mare's nest
where false reality reigns

no peace
no bliss

only unsatisfied hunger
for the Great Presence
perseveres


@ Jeannette D. Asuncion 2012

Posted for : Magpie Tales
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9 comments:

  1. could it have been a nightmare's nest?

    in the dragon's nest

    verification makes it really hard to comment. you'd get more comments if you turned it off

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  2. Good job again my friend!..

    JJRod'z

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  3. i hope he keeps looking then and does not settle as the rest...

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  4. I like the direction you have gone with the prompt. Clever and true.

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  5. Ah true! Good job indeed!

    Anna :o]

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  6. Beautiful words....truly spoken! :-)

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  7. I always try standing on my head to help get past the mares nest.
    Thanks for the potent image

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  8. Now a mare's nest would make an interesting picture, eh? ! LOL

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